Working with Jack


Additional references and testimonials are available on request. 

"A wise and encouraging teacher as well as a talented writer, Paul has helped me understand precisely what I am trying to achieve, and the story I want my audience to experience. I am extremely grateful to Paul and recommend him as a mentor to all aspiring writers and even to already proven authors who are seeking input and evaluation of their work."

Hazel B. Redland Bay


"Paul's structural suggestions highlight where there is a need for action to increase the pace, where the emotion behind or in response to situations is missing or not clear, challenges when language or behaviour doesn’t fit the character, and when chapters aren’t servicing the story.

Don’t consult Paul if you aren’t committed to a long of rewriting after his critique, but if you are, your story will definitely be more powerful, believable and engaging. My four completed manuscripts have been enhanced by working through each one with Paul."

Sue R. Northern Rivers

Winner of Varuna residency and Byron Writers Festival residency.

"Paul has a natural talent and a keen eye when it comes to dissecting a MS. I am

grateful for his help"

June K. Redlands Brisbane.